Sixth Blog Prompt

The fairy tale I will be writing about is called Enchanted. This story begins with a princess named Giselle and a prince named Edward, happily together in their own cartoon dimension. Until one day, the evil step mother of Edward, tricked the princess and pushed her into a well. His step mother didn't want them together, so she sent Giselle to New York City. Giselle wasn't familiar with the area until she met a man named Robert and his daughter. Edward then noticed that Giselle was missing, so he went to go find her in New York. Moral of the story is that Edward was seeing a woman named Nancy, when he met Giselle. He decided to help her get around the city to find a place to stay until he let her stay at his apartment. Robert's daughter began to get comfortable with Giselle because she had special powers like making animals come and sing with her. When Edward finally came to New York, he never stopped finding his soon to be wife. As we fast forward towards the end, Robert had already broken up with Nancy. Then, Robert and Giselle began to fall in love with each other. Edward saw that she was happy and was sad that she moved on. Edward then meets Nancy at a ball and fell in love there. Each of the characters were falling in love with the opposite person at the end. It showed Edward taking Nancy to the cartoon dimension and marrying her. I have changed the story back to as if Edward and Giselle got married at the end instead of Robert and Giselle. They all lived happily ever after with the person they started with in the beginning.

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